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Bait and Switch

A stronger form of false promise where the reader feels deliberately lured into the wrong book.

Principle

Surprise is welcome; mis-selling is not.

Takeaways

  • It often involves genre, protagonist, romance, premise, or advertised conflict.
  • A switch can work if the first promise is honoured at a deeper level.
  • It fails when the bait is discarded rather than transformed.

Overview

Bait and switch is the reader's sense that one experience was used to sell access to another. It is not simply a plot twist; it is a contract problem.

Examples

  • A novel marketed and opened as a heist abandons the heist for unrelated court politics.
  • A sequel promises the established protagonist, then replaces them without making replacement the point.

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