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Cumulative Sentence

A sentence begins with its main clause, then gathers modifying detail.

Principle

A cumulative sentence advances, then deepens.

Takeaways

  • It gives the reader a clear base before adding texture or consequence.
  • The trailing phrases can widen image, thought, or emotional pressure.
  • Weak cumulative tails feel like afterthought instead of accumulation.

Overview

A cumulative sentence states its main clause early and then extends through phrases or clauses that add detail, qualification, motion, or reflection. It is a flexible engine for descriptive and reflective prose.

Examples

  • She crossed the room, careful of the broken glass, listening for his step on the stairs.
  • The horse waited by the gate, white-eyed, steaming in the cold, already afraid of the road.

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