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Cumulative Sentence
A sentence begins with its main clause, then gathers modifying detail.
Principle
A cumulative sentence advances, then deepens.
Takeaways
- It gives the reader a clear base before adding texture or consequence.
- The trailing phrases can widen image, thought, or emotional pressure.
- Weak cumulative tails feel like afterthought instead of accumulation.
Overview
A cumulative sentence states its main clause early and then extends through phrases or clauses that add detail, qualification, motion, or reflection. It is a flexible engine for descriptive and reflective prose.
Examples
- She crossed the room, careful of the broken glass, listening for his step on the stairs.
- The horse waited by the gate, white-eyed, steaming in the cold, already afraid of the road.