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Info Dump

A passage delivers world or backstory without scene pressure.

Principle

Information without need does not retain.

Takeaways

  • Distribute exposition across scene.
  • Pressure the information against character desire or conflict.
  • If a paragraph could be cut without loss, the reader did not need it.

Overview

An info dump is a stretch of exposition — history, magic system, backstory, geography — delivered detached from scene pressure. It produces unread paragraphs and tonal sag.

Examples

  • A character explains the political system to no one in particular.
  • A chapter pauses to summarise three centuries of magic.
  • A protagonist remembers a long backstory unprompted.

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