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Recap Drag

Sequel exposition over-explains what returning readers already know.

Principle

Refresh memory through consequence, not summary whenever possible.

Takeaways

  • New readers need orientation; returning readers need momentum.
  • Recap is strongest when embedded in present pressure.
  • Repeated explanatory refreshers can make a sequel feel stalled at the threshold.

Overview

Recap drag is the slowdown caused by reminding readers of prior-book events, rules, and relationships too heavily. The issue is especially common at the start of sequels.

Examples

  • Every returning character is reintroduced with a paragraph of prior plot.
  • A magic rule is explained three times before it matters again.

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