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Restraint

The discipline of not saying more than the moment can use.

Principle

Restraint trusts pressure, detail, and reader inference to do their work.

Takeaways

  • It can govern description, emotion, exposition, dialogue, and theme.
  • Restraint is not withholding everything; it is proportion.
  • The stronger the scene's pressure, the less explanation it may need.

Overview

Restraint is the broad craft virtue behind less-is-more effects. It means choosing proportion: enough detail to embody, enough explanation to orient, enough emotion to land, and enough silence for the reader to enter.

Examples

  • A reunion scene lets the characters talk about luggage because the emotional history is already active.
  • A violent discovery is described through one practical action rather than a flood of commentary.

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